Feedback I got...

Feedback and comments I got back from my target audience/school friends when showing them my pieces:
For the contents page:
"good brand identity colours used, links it back to the front cover and DPS well"
"the main picture is a bit pixelated"
"the font is a bit difficult to read in places"
" a caption could be put underneath the smaller picture to give it more information"
"main picture is unclear"

Most of the comments that I got back from the contents page linked back to the pixelation of it and how unclear the image seemed.

For the front cover:
"an issue number could be included to make it more realistic"
"the title could do with some work to look more professional"
"some of the text is a bit pixelated for some reason?"

Again, most comments I got back referred to pixelated text and images. I need to look into this when I go to improve my pieces.

For the DPS:
"think about putting in page numbers to make it more realistic"
"think about changing the 'exclusive' text, editing how it looks"
"good colour use to link it back to the other pages"

I think the main thing I need to look at here is why my images are pixelated. You can read about this and my improvements in my folder :)